Strengths
There is continuity and flow in the edit.
Weaknesses
There is no soundtrack, which needs to be added to help build tension, and other sounds such as a phone ringing need to be added. The shot at 0:19 is wobbly and not very smooth panning over to the tree. Also, titles need to be added and the font needs to be changed at 0:13. Half of the film needs to be added.
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